Salty Sweet Peace
Salty Sweet Peace (contest Show me the sea in three - RedSun)
Can one dismiss salty sweetness of skin
sea-kissed; simple deliciousness tasted
on tip of tongue meshed between tranquil lips?
Smiling as sails rise, dip on frosted waves
of large to small gentle ships toting fast
friends, family, or fresh fish for frying.
Stomachs tripping as swells quickly increase;
knees to buckle before breakfast's release.
Then clouds flee. Reestablished inner peace.
sea-kissed; simple deliciousness tasted
on tip of tongue meshed between tranquil lips?
Smiling as sails rise, dip on frosted waves
of large to small gentle ships toting fast
friends, family, or fresh fish for frying.
Stomachs tripping as swells quickly increase;
knees to buckle before breakfast's release.
Then clouds flee. Reestablished inner peace.
Contest / Show me the sea in three
by RedSun
three stanzas
three lines in each stanza
30 max syllables each stanza
pretend i am your grand pa, that just lost his vision 5 years ago, he is a fisherman, surfer, born and breed on the beach but now lives in a hospice in Arizona far away from what he knows and misses most, be the one to bring him back to the smell and vibe that only the open ocean can give
any poem goes but the rules are the rules, 3-3 30, take me home
good luck
a smooth sea never made a skilled sailor...take that on board
The Splendor of Jehovah’s Creation
“The Abounding Wealth of the Seas”
https://wol.jw.org/en/wol/d/r1/lp-e/2004682#h=1:0-18:647
by RedSun
three stanzas
three lines in each stanza
30 max syllables each stanza
pretend i am your grand pa, that just lost his vision 5 years ago, he is a fisherman, surfer, born and breed on the beach but now lives in a hospice in Arizona far away from what he knows and misses most, be the one to bring him back to the smell and vibe that only the open ocean can give
any poem goes but the rules are the rules, 3-3 30, take me home
good luck
a smooth sea never made a skilled sailor...take that on board
The Splendor of Jehovah’s Creation
“The Abounding Wealth of the Seas”
https://wol.jw.org/en/wol/d/r1/lp-e/2004682#h=1:0-18:647
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